awesome fucking page. obviously good perspective, but good narrative style and pacing, too. i have the last fifth of it with just nt as the background on my mac computer.
My favorite page from Secretary. This is how the infinite canvas should be used. The way you handled the shift in perspective, the reflections on the water... masterfully done.
Still my absolute favorite story by you, and this is probably one of my all-time favorite pages. I remember first reading it, and my jaw dropped. Somewhere I have the printed version... never got to finish it before packing it away in a move, but I hope it didn't get lost and ruined in the flood my house experienced this past year.
Nope! It was about a year ago when Texas was just coming out of a year-long drought... then all of a sudden, RAIN! There was some flash flooding and the water came right through the house. Since we had just moved alot of my stuff was still packed up in boxes in the garage. Might have been in there, not sure. Haven't seen my books since then.
Somewhere I have the printed version... never got to finish it before packing it away in a move, but I hope it didn't get lost and ruined in the flood my house experienced this past year.